What do you think of my poem?? its for school!?

I like that poem, AND the message =] i love how you presented it ^-^ as u said in the poem ur pretty unique with that =D!, but others do have other opinions, some can say this is beautiful some say its bad, but maybe they arent in to poetry or are into different types, So don't let that get you down because i get some negative critism sometimes and you just have to understand people have different opinions =} but i for one LOVE IT ^^